Version 3 作者:蒋雨锟
Teachers,I want to tell you...
Teachers,I want to say thank you,
because you are very kind.
When I face trouble,
you always help me.
Teachers,I want to say thank you,
beacuse you are very patient.
When I have some difficult in learning,
you always encourage me.
Teachers,I want to say thank you,
because you work hard.
Every day,you have many things to do.
Every day,you have many children to help.
Although no longer you are young,
Although no longer you have beautiful faces,
Although no longer you have the attractive voices,
But you are beautiful in my heart.
Whatever it happens,wherever I go,
I will miss you forever.
Teachers,I want to say thank you.
修改错误:although和but不能同时出现,偶尔大小写出现些失误。
老师点评:You are a very nice boy,and you express your true feelings and I trust that you really express your gratitude to your wonderful teachers.